Hi!
This week for reading our text was called:
Waiting in the wings, by Hannah Cramp.
In this DLO it shows the star rating, a little blurb and some more things about the text.
This story is about someone who is very nervous for something they are about to do.
I hope you enjoy, here it is...
I think that it was very descriptive of how she was feeling and the author showed that really well.
That was it, do you have reading texts? Do you think you would enjoy a story like it? What's your favourite kind of description to do?
Until next time...
Bye!
Hello Abby, I liked the way you made the pictures look so real it really shows well. I also liked the way you said her feelings it all goes well together. I wonder do you want to do more like that, I mean why not..? And please if you can keep making more they are amazing too look at. keep it up.
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Hi Lucy, thank you for commenting on my blog. Yes I do want to do more like that, since it is reading I'm just waiting for the next Friday DLO we do. Again thank you for your positive comment.
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Abby.