Hi!
This week we have been doing narrative writing.
With our narrative writing we have 25 different prompts to choose from.
Since we have been doing writing I decided to
share the first two paragraphs of the story that I wrote on Tuesday.
The prompt for that story was:
I was very excited to write about this since it gave me an opportunity to write a story that relates to some books I like to read.
So I hope you enjoy the introduction of my story.
That was the introduction for the story.
If you want to you can comment some feedback for that
first part of the story and I will try to improve it.
Also comment if you want me to blog some more narrative
introductions or a different part of the stories.
Whats your favourite kind of story?
Did you like this story?
Do you want to read more?
Until next time...
Bye!
Hello Abby,
ReplyDeleteIt is me Albin,
I really liked your blog and your story intro. Especially that DLO's first page. That hand really looked realistic. Did you make it? If you did that is really cool.
Maybe next time you could add more text. You can make the reader feel like it wants more.
Kind Regards,
Albin.