Hi!
Welcome to my first class blog... at home.
So because of the lock down we have been doing our work at home.
Everyday we have to do a long write based off a picture.
So I decided that I would share my first one that I did on Wednesday.
Here's the picture...
This is the LINK to where I got the photo.
Now here is my writing.
The fragile cloaks and poofy dresses cover the fluffy fur of the cats. Their claws have 
been freshly cut and they are ready for the show. Pearl necklaces adorn female cats
been freshly cut and they are ready for the show. Pearl necklaces adorn female cats
while bow ties are fastened for the males. They prepare to dance their special waltz but 
then they are stopped. The lights dim. The music comes to a grinding halt. Cats are 
scattering off stage. Avoiding the big hands that are coming down to grasp their waists.
 As loud as a stampede they screech and claw the hands. But it is no use, the long
 fingers could crush them all within seconds.
The shop maker quickly grabbed the cats and placed them inside his workshop. He is
 merely making new outfits but the cats do not understand. They try to rush away but 
are blocked. A long needle goes in and out of fresh frocks. Making little buttons for the 
suits and intricate patterns for the dresses. Gold thread shimmers and silver shines. 
The calming workshop is filled with mini cats that are waiting for eyes or a nose or 
even for fur. The old man quickly grabs the youngest pair of the scrambling bunch and 
wraps them in some soft paper then they get placed in a box. The lid is clamped on and
 a purple ribbon is tied to keep the lid there.
They hear the screams of the young kittens as they get carried off to the front room to
 be sold off to some young kids. This is every cat in the workshop's worst nightmare. 
Being gifted to the nasty, sticky little hands of children. Everyone is frozen from fear waiting for what the man would do next. Another kitten is grabbed and propped up on its 
feet. A lovely red gown is placed over the babys head and a gold crown is waiting to go
 on the cat's head. This is normal by now, they all get brought in to the workshop to
 change outfits then get put back on display to be brought.
A handsome cat with ginger fur is dressed with the finest navy suit. With shining
 bronze buttons and a bright bow tie to finish the look. He is one that hates this place
 the most. Every day he plots to escape, but with stiff joints and clipped claws it
 becomes almost impossible. The cats get put back on display and people constantly
 pass by the window staring in on the little cats. This week they are set up for a play,
 they are all paired up and got seated in soft seats to make it seem that they are
 watching the play that is outside the window.
Then an old lady with a plain flowing dress walks into the store. The bell jingles with her
 arrival. She glides over to the counter and asks for the cat she wants. With a nod the
 man strides over to the cats and picks up the navy suited cat. With a few movements
 he is buried under the paper and is inside his own box with a navy ribbon. When the
 lady left with the box she opened it with gentle hands. Then grabbed his left hand and
 let him wave goodbye to his friends and family. He finally found the perfect home.
I hope you liked it, I think that it was a good story.
What do you think of when you see the picture?
What did you like best about the story?
Do you like cats?
Comment what you think and I will try to reply.
Kind regards,
Abby.
 
My goodness Abby. What an amazing picture! What is even more amazing is how your writing both reflects the (dare I say?) strangeness of the picture but also evokes a number of feelings.
ReplyDeleteI think it is wonderful that you have created a wonderful piece of writing inspired by this picture. I especially like how you have been able to give voice to the cats' feelings. Worst nightmare indeed.
I am glad, and relieved, that there was a happy ending for at least one of the cats. I like how you have been able to describe the decrepit state of the cats yet given them hope as well.
A simply wonderful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing. I hope you will share more writing over the coming weeks.
Take care.
Kind regards
Mr R