The Ice palace

Ivan clapped a hand to his mouth, Stifling a cry. He was looking at a huge wolf collision. One of the

younger wolfs had leaped at him when suddenly the biggest wolf had pushed the younger wolf out of

the way. Ivan was afraid, too afraid to look up from his shoes to face the wolf. The big wolf suddenly

gave Ivan’s shirt a hard tug and pulled him to the ground. Ivan huddled himself into a ball, trying to

disappear. To his surprise, the big wolf came and curled up around Ivan. Ivan ended up falling into a

deep, deep sleep. Suddenly Ivan awoke to the wolf jerking at his shirt, desperately trying to get Ivan

up. The wolf then dropped a slab of meat onto his chest.

What Ivan didn’t realize was that the meat wasn’t steak or chicken, It was human. This human was a

little boy that looked just like Ivan just smaller. Ivan Screamed out. He was horrified at what he saw,

It was his brother. He looked up, and he saw Starjik and his voice boomed in the morning sun “What

you didn’t know, is that some kids are eaten!” He then chuckled pleased with what he said. Ivan

sobbed, looking down at his brother. He then shoved his brother's body off him, so he could get up

and bury him. But as soon as he did that the wolves lunged at his brother, and ate him in seconds.

Ivan crawled, into a corner. He suddenly felt like the ropes connecting him to his brother were cut,

and his brother was floating away while Ivan was clinging on to a tree root, afraid to let go. Ivan then

realized that he could no longer go any further to save his brother, or anyone else because if he let

go of the root he would go. The tree did not want Ivan clinging to the root, so the tree danced in the

wind trying to get free. But Ivan knew he had to get out of there before it was his turn to float up to the

sky. Like an arrow shooting from a bow, Ivan felt a swarm of warmth so he tried to remove his furry

jacket but he could not find the zipper nor could he stand up. He then tried removing his shoes but

what was in his feets place were small paws. He crawled over to an ice-covered lake and

whimpered at his reflection. He had become a wolf with small paws, blue glassy eyes, pitch black fur

and claws as sharp as knives. He decided that if he was a wolf he could talk to wolves, so Ivan

foolishly slipped onto the ice and that's when disaster struck. The ice parted, swallowing him whole.

Like knives, the rush of Ice water hit Ivan. Like a cat, he desperately clawed for the sky, trying to

escape the ice prison. But the hole was closing over, and that's when the watery hole became ice.

The End

This week we have been writing a conflict, resolution and ending to a book that we have been reading in our own words and storyline. This was my story and I am really proud of it. Can I please have some feedback on this story ending.

The book that we have been reading is called the Ice palace and we have finished it and it was a great book