TEN MINUTE WRITING CHALLANGE PART 1

It was 1992 and this man was being chased by the police. He was wearing a dark coat and a white

shirt. He had a short mustache and was very tall. This man wasn’t any man he was magic. Ever

since he was little he could shift through walls, Little did he know that this magic would stop in 1993.

He was born into a family of robbers so his family took advantage of this gift and made him rob the banks for them. So It was the day before 1993 when he was being chased and it was 1 minute before

midnight when he ran at the wall to make his escape…

I better explain what he had robed to make half the town's police force chase him, well I will tell you.

It was the night his family had been planning for months, the great rob of the queens crown and all of

its jewels. He did this successfully but he was caught by the guards on the way out. So he ran as far

and as fast as his legs could take him till he got to the park wall. He got into the park no problem

going through the first wall but going through the second wall it became 1993. He was stuck. The police climbed the wall ang got the jewels back as the man slowly dies a slow painful death by

suffocation. The family was arrested quickly after with a life sentence in jail. They were sobbing and

once he died the towns folk pulled him up using string and painted him gold. People now say that in

2093, at 12 am he will come to life to continue what he had started.

Today we did a ten-minute writing challenge about a man being stuck in a wall. I think I did really well with this. Can I please have some feedback for this.