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Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Story bird



This is a really cool book for people who loves  a good mystery by a kid. I hope you will like my story about a little boy trying to get home.

3 comments:

  1. What a very interesting journey you have taken me on Abby. i am glad the story had a happy ending. Did you imagine anything about the lives of the characters the boy met? I did wonder how scary or friendly the characters were. I also wondered if they were happy or angry. Why di the boy need to get home? Where had he been?

    Thank you for sharing your story.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. I really enjoyed reading your story. It was nice that everyone wanted to help the boy get home. How did you come up with names of the characters in your story?

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  3. I really enjoyed reading your story. It was nice that everyone wanted to help the boy get home. How did you come up with names of the characters in your story?

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