What a very interesting journey you have taken me on Abby. i am glad the story had a happy ending. Did you imagine anything about the lives of the characters the boy met? I did wonder how scary or friendly the characters were. I also wondered if they were happy or angry. Why di the boy need to get home? Where had he been?
I really enjoyed reading your story. It was nice that everyone wanted to help the boy get home. How did you come up with names of the characters in your story?
I really enjoyed reading your story. It was nice that everyone wanted to help the boy get home. How did you come up with names of the characters in your story?
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What a very interesting journey you have taken me on Abby. i am glad the story had a happy ending. Did you imagine anything about the lives of the characters the boy met? I did wonder how scary or friendly the characters were. I also wondered if they were happy or angry. Why di the boy need to get home? Where had he been?
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I look forward to your next blog post.
I really enjoyed reading your story. It was nice that everyone wanted to help the boy get home. How did you come up with names of the characters in your story?
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story. It was nice that everyone wanted to help the boy get home. How did you come up with names of the characters in your story?
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