Kids are the future.

This is Maddie and my made up party will you vote for it yes or no.
Can I have your feedback please.

The lost animals

The Lost Animals

Kitty, Panda, Doge and Tige were all in the forest together for a fun trip. As quick as a cheetah, Panda obviously wanted food “we’ve been walking with no food for hours” Panda groaned there was a small silence then Tige said “ We just left. I have to tie my shoelaces (wink wink) keep going and I will catch up.”. As thoughtful as an owl, Doge knew that something was up so she followed Tige. within minutes Tige turned around and saw Doge. Suddenly Tige felt the urge to look around so first she looked to the left she saw trees then she looked to the right more trees then she looked in front of her there was more fog than before and it was thicker then she looked behind her and saw Doge again that didn’t worry her but the fog did. Frantiquly Tige grabbed Doge by the arm and ran into the depths of the forest and through to the other side…

Kitty and Panda were really worried they didn’t know where Doge and Tige went so they continued thinking that they were going through the trees and trying to get to the picnic spot first.Tempted Panda ran and shouted “ I NEED FOOD”. Within minutes kitty caught up and they started looking for Doge and Tige because they started feeling scared.

Soon Kitty and Panda hear a screeching sound then got chased into a river it was lucky that panda floated to the top because she's super chubby while kitty was holding on to her trying to live and float while saying “I’M TOO YOUNG TO DIE” then they got knocked out. Meanwhile Tige and Doge were sitting on a tree stump on the other side waiting for Kitty and panda. When Kitty and Panda woke up after being unconscious for about 2 bajillion hours they found themselves at the picnic spot so they looked up and saw a Lion, Liger and Tiger as well as Doge and Tige. After that they finally had their lunch then rode home on the animals.

Tige woke up suddenly realizing it was all a dream. Then she called her friends and told them everything then Unicorn said “So can we go on a picnic in the forest despite the fact that we might be eaten alive.” “UNICORN!” they all shouted. “I’ll take that as a no then” whispered Unicorn.” OF COURSE WE WANT TO GO!” They all said excitedly then they started planning...

THE END

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My Personal Targets

1. Doing more Descriptive phrases
2. Sentence starters

What I am proud of my writing today

1. I think I did some good sentence starters
2. I think I put in some really descriptive phrases

What I need to work on next

1. Getting better at sentence starters

This is the story I wrote for E-asTTle but we had a picture we had to build the story off which is The Bush

My timetable for this week.

This is My original timetable for this week except some small changes.
Just incase you can't read the color code thing this is it.
Green: I worked to my highest standard and/or I achieved what I set out to do.
Orange: I worked a good standard and/or I mostly achieved what was intended.
Red: I found it hard to stay focused and/or I didn't achieve what I aimed to do.

NZ 2017 Elections!!

This is the finished one of our Inquiry of NZ Elections.
Shukoor, Cayde and Zach Did The first part and Maddie Bridget and I did the second part.
I hope you enjoy.

TOOLKIT!!

This Is Ariana, laura, Maddie and I's toolkit on how to use or make a Google drawing or make animals fruit people etc.
Only 4 groups of 4 in Rimu can go and I was one of the people.
Hope you enjoy Our Toolkit.
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A toolkit is our cluster all make 4 toolkits I think and we learn something from others toolkits.