Hi Abby my name is Lauren and I am a year 5 at St. Bernadette's School. What I liked is all the colour you put in and the thought you put into the slide-show by putting your favorite authors and how they make the idea for the story. Maybe next time you could put more about the other authors and there books as I was really interested in the ones that you had wrote about. Why did you choose to write about the authors of books and your book awards day!
Hi Lauren, Its me Abby. Thank you for your feedback and next time I will write more, everyone had to write about it because well it took up all of monday and we probably had nothing else to put on our blog that's like that.
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Hi Abby my name is Lauren and I am a year 5 at St. Bernadette's School. What I liked is all the colour you put in and the thought you put into the slide-show by putting your favorite authors and how they make the idea for the story. Maybe next time you could put more about the other authors and there books as I was really interested in the ones that you had wrote about. Why did you choose to write about the authors of books and your book awards day!
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren, Its me Abby. Thank you for your feedback and next time I will write more, everyone had to write about it because well it took up all of monday and we probably had nothing else to put on our blog that's like that.
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