#Bob and Derpy
WOW, that was surprising especially in the middle of nowhere, in africa without a soul in sight. I am about 10 to 11 and I got lost from my family, and now I was staring at this thing and this thing is staring down at me WOW it was Remarkable. There are two giraffes having a piggy back ride so as quick as a hyena, I took a photo, then tried some other shots.
Suddenly, wind blew across my 1 meter long blonde hair (Yes I measure my hair) and I felt like climbing up the giraffe and so I started climbing up the first giraffes 19-20 ft body ( Yes it got measured) then I suddenly felt like wondering how did they get into this Ordeal moment. I got onto the first giraffes back then started climbing the second giraffe which was about 5-10 feet tall. When I reached the top of both giraffes I felt like I was on top of the world until…
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” I Screamed I was falling a 20-25 ft drop I was sure to get a bad bad bad injury. THUMP I landed on my Right leg “OWWWWWWWWWWW” I cried. I knew I couldn’t get home and it was a nuisance one big terrible nuisance. I’m stuck and I cant build a shelter or walk to the town where I lived it was to far away and I can’t move and night was falling what am I going to do….
In the end I just went to sleep, and the giraffes decided to curl up around me and also go to sleep. In about 7 in the morning something small but strong was nudging me it was the big giraffes head so I decided to name him Bob It was a very emotional then I named the small one Derpy because he was weird and funny. Suddenly Bob picked me and Derpy up onto his back and set off to the nearest town where I lived.
Bob got us to the hospital on time because it snowed ,but they stayed outside my window the hole time and when the doctors let me go home, I asked my mum and dad if I could keep Bob and Derpy in our huge mansion after all it was very tall and my Mum and dad were very wealthy, in the end they said yes for them to stay.
THE END
This is my Friday long write from a few weeks ago but I think it's one of my best ones I hope you liked it.
The highlighted words are some words that the teachers put up on our tv for us to use in our writing but we had to highlight them.
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