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Friday, October 19, 2018

The cart

The Cart


Firstly, dad left me at grandpa’s house, with only a bag with a few things inside to play with.
Grandpa plonked me down on a box and then resumed mowing the lawn. That was the
exact moment I saw something out of the corner of my eye, it was a box, of old family
photos. I stacked lots of boxes on a cart so then I could grab the photos. CRASH,
everything fell including the photos. Then I noticed a picture of a man and a young boy
with the cart standing in front of a tree. The next thing that happened was that grandpa
told me about the escaped monkeys, then he took me on the bright red cart down the
street.


After that, We were walking down the street, when lots and lots of trees sprung up out of
the ground all around us forming a thick forest. It was then that we had to go faster and
faster because there were monkeys were chasing us and they were right on our tail. I was
so scared, I held on tight to the cart then there was a big THUMP. It was Grandpa
jumping into the cart next to me. We rushed through the forest until we fell into the lake.
The cart turned into a boat and We were going down a river at high speed, but we were
ok. We were rushing down the river then my teddy saw a waterfall!


Next, the cart suddenly turned into an airplane and we were high up in the sky.
We were soaring through the sky and I started to relax a bit and enjoyed the ride.
We soared past lots of different shaped clouds. Suddenly, we stopped soaring and we
had to jump because there was no more fuel in the tank. We all jumped, then we had to
pull the cord to make our parachutes go up so then we could float down. Once we got
down we stopped to eat some food and drink some water. I was glad that we got a break
because I was getting tired.


Soon, there was a strike coming from space it was an alien. Quickly, we jumped into our
cart that turned into a rocket! Then before I knew it, we were in space being attacked by
aliens. My job was to shoot them with my gun so then we would be safe. This went on for
a while till all we saw was the biggest alien ship we had ever seen. It was big and was a
range of colors from dark blue to lime green, and it was getting ready to shoot us then…


Lastly, Dad arrived, he quickly snapped us out of our daydream and asked why we were
filthy. Then he saw our cart. I was amazed dad had been on the cart before and had so
many adventures on it before me. It was then time for me to go home. So I guess I was
wrong Grandpa isn’t boring he is amazing and I want to see him again. To sum my
adventure up it was an amazing one, and it might have changed my mind about adults,
only a little bit. After this adventure, I always went to grandpa’s house once a week so
we could have our amazing adventures.

The End

Today we did some writing based on a short movie called taking flight. For the writing, we had to write down what happened in the movie then we had 40 minutes to add lots more detail. I hope you liked my story and w comment on it. 

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